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Critique

From: Nathaniel Houston II
Date: 15 Sep 2003
Time: 07:50:06 -0400
Remote Name: 10.4.7.96

Comments

very good organization and writing but some of the big, usually not understood words needs a little clarification. maybe a couple definitions of these monster words would help. overall, the paper was good.

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